Thou alteredst me…

In loneliness found I was, deep the weep
was which flew day and night in me back then.
For I was not more than a shadow of man
until thy real beauty in this empty space did peep.

Of solitariness the aeons which used to creep
over me blown away by thee were with final ban.
Sublime my marvel, qualities thy fan
in this poor wretched heart the strongest sweep.

From where did thou come, sexy sweet thing of mine?
From what dimension moved thou into my life
to give me chances of reaching zones divine?

My true religion; my most precious shrine.
In stases was I placed; never-ending strife —
— thou altered such, for ever was crossed the line…
 

 

 

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