We

Now we are sitting
Immersed in this landscape
Where the rocks hold my body
And my eyes your blue ribbon
Remember now of this season
The reason for everything that I lived

I feel cold on your side
I don’t understand this tide
The ocean never more wet my feet
The birds stopped of sing
I let now the past sit
In your memories of me
Leave on the rock, your ring
You are free to fly in your sky
Fly in search the happiness
Fly away little princess
I am the page turned of your book
I am a small part of your heart

The day dies and the moon shines
Without you I am my own night
I am a page without lines
I am the sun without light
I lived with you my faire tale,
Reads now in my heart… for sale.
 

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Submitted by vanesitapoet on Mon, 05/02/2011 - 15:00.

I seem to like this poem, I find it very creative and the structure full of internal passion. Good Work

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Thank you!

Submitted by elpedropoeta on Thu, 05/05/2011 - 02:09.

thank you very much, for your comment!

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