Falling for you

I observe how the ocean
Crawls itself on the beach sand,
While a special emotion
Tells me that you are my man.

I can see your rainbow colors,
Shining through the things you write,
Sprouting like flowers
Aiming to make things right.

It’s all the proof I need
To make me fall for you,
And feel my heart as fresh
as the morning dew.

TELL ME THAT YOU LOVE ME
I NEED TO HEAR IT FROM YOU,
TELL ME,
PLEASE DO.
 

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Very nice, I love the

Submitted by vanesitapoet on Sun, 11/13/2011 - 04:42.

Very nice, I love the comparison you did here, brief but with a touch of beauty and movement.

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Thank you for your comment. I

Submitted by Nostalgia on Fri, 11/18/2011 - 14:53.

Thank you for your comment. I agree with you about the movement, it could be used for music.
I love music, and nothing would pleases me most than hear someone sing my poems...

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