Nice Try!

shall i ask a star
for the questions in my jar
lately replied the star
sorry, you gonna wait so far

shall i ask the moon
why are you alone?
aren't you tired?
the moon replied
''if i answer i'll be fired
sorry, that's not required''

shall i ask a cloud
high away from the crowd
do you feel so proud?
shall it answer i doubt
''yeah.. that's not allowed''

shall i ask the sun
rapidly said the sun
''you playing or having fun
wake up i'm the sun
oh .. you'd better run''

in respect to the sky
i start with saying hi
some questions starting with 'why'
i know the sky won't lie
i can wait for the reply
finally replied the sky
'' No answers.. but nice try'' 

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