(( Step by Step ))

Step by step,

Nested corridors,

Premature images

Which are more mysterious than wisdom

Are passing from my closed eyes

In the bed of the gypsies lane market

Gathering of wolf and ewe tribes are going on

Smell of contract and treaty,

Ever lasting peace and expand of land,

Which ,this dirty bloods flowing in the vessles with out vessle liberty

Will make posterity flow

My wife,

Sing lullaby to our child

Tomorrow will be war day.

((** Poet: Seyed Morteza Hamidzadeh **))

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Luz's picture

I liked your poem

you are a litle ansious but i've to say to you I realy liked of your poem,it's beautiful

Luz's picture

I liked your poem

you are a litle ansious but i've to say to you I realy liked of your poem

Eye Lii's picture

This poem is very good. Very

This poem is very good. Very emotional...5*

Rui Lima's picture

deep

it shows lots of emotions... probably just a glimps of what life is over there in iran, right? :'-(

Ana Wolfart's picture

I am Brazilian, either

I am Brazilian,

either welcome to the site,

I appreciate the truth of its poem,

I do not dominate the English but I use of the translator to understand,

its poetry very strong,

exists inside  much truth and emotion !

Congratulations

Ana Wolfart

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